Friday, January 16, 2009

Draft Version Press Release 1: Announcement

January 16, 2008
For immediate release
Company name: Abc Real Estate
Company Address: 123 Creative Way, Logan UT 84341
Contact Info: 801-555-4567

ABC REAL ESTATE IS LOOKING FOR INVESTORS
A patent pending company structured after others with proven positive results
LOGAN, Utah­­—ABC real estate is looking for investors to help in starting up a company new to Cache County that will benefit investors, homeowners, those with poor credit and creditors. There is a high success rate with currently established companies in Salt Lake City, Utah and in California.
ABC Real Estate is a creative new way to look at real estate. They

1 comments:

Joshua Rosen said...

I love your headline and sub-headline. I think that you are not too the point with your sentences. It isn't specific enough. It was sort of boring.

I think that you had the best headline.

Goodluck